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You're a beauty. great poems! really hit home with me.
You're a beauty. great poems! really hit home with me.
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beautiful.
beautiful.
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yes
yes
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Powerful. And most importantly, that's how it is. Well done!
Powerful. And most importantly, that's how it is. Well done!
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Very beautiful! Bravo!
Very beautiful! Bravo!
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The first part of the poem is much better than the second. Up to a lineBut fortunately still not always. Further on, everything gets confused.
The first part of the poem is much better than the second. Up to a lineBut fortunately still not always. Further on, everything gets confused.
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Nice poem! Love is a complicated thing.
Nice poem! Love is a complicated thing.
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Super!
Super!
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a little not in rhyme - a little hard to perceive but if a little edited I think it would be great!
a little not in rhyme - a little hard to perceive but if a little edited I think it would be great!
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a poet! My name is Sveta! Love is not a word, but a feeling, above all!
a poet! My name is Sveta! Love is not a word, but a feeling, above all!
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will be even better if you read the classics. it's no offense. it's a farewell from the heart to you.
will be even better if you read the classics. it's no offense. it's a farewell from the heart to you.
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have you been writing poetry for a long time? you have a talent. will you become great?
have you been writing poetry for a long time? you have a talent. will you become great?
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From the wordsKisses. need to work as if someone else continued.And then you can let it into circulation.You're sure to find HER.
From the wordsKisses. need to work as if someone else continued.And then you can let it into circulation.You're sure to find HER.
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It's already great that you write poems and if they are from the soul - this is another plus. and experience will polish your poems.Good luck in your love and creativity.
It's already great that you write poems and if they are from the soul - this is another plus. and experience will polish your poems.Good luck in your love and creativity.
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Hi! Good for you, you're obviously in love, that's why you write well being in love and dreaming of everything the whole world is blooming and the trees begin to whisper the birds talk and your girlfriend is the most beautiful most intelligent.Most unavailable. Go ahead, write about love, written by so many can your words tell someone that love is better than war!
Hi! Good for you, you're obviously in love, that's why you write well being in love and dreaming of everything the whole world is blooming and the trees begin to whisper the birds talk and your girlfriend is the most beautiful most intelligent.Most unavailable. Go ahead, write about love, written by so many can your words tell someone that love is better than war!
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Beautiful. Well done. I wish you find the one and only!
Beautiful. Well done. I wish you find the one and only!
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I like you better.
I like you better.
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And you're an optimist.
And you're an optimist.
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The mood of the poem is good. But the rhyme, excuse me, suffers, and very much. I dream - flying and years - always. weak. And in general,.great when people try to express emotion in words. I do that myself most of the time.
The mood of the poem is good. But the rhyme, excuse me, suffers, and very much. I dream - flying and years - always. weak. And in general,.great when people try to express emotion in words. I do that myself most of the time.